摘要 : 考研备考已经进入了初期阶段,在这时期,考研的同学们可能都在稳固基础了,但是一些小问题常常被忽略,今天心专注寄宿考研就为大家整理一下,考研英语作文中易犯的小错误。
考研备考已经进入了初期阶段,在这时期,考研的同学们可能都在稳固基础了,但是一些小问题常常被忽略,今天心专注寄宿考研就为大家整理一下,考研英语作文中易犯的小错误。
心专注寄宿考研作为寄宿考研行业的领先者,有着多年的考研教学经验。从学生的角度来看,为大家提供了一个良好的学习氛围和学习环境。下面心专注寄宿考研就带大家一起来看看小错误有哪些!
1、指代方面的错误
在使用代词it,he,this,that,which,one等时,前文中应出现明确的先行词。
如:“since we cannot know what particular bit of knowledge a child will need in the future,it is senseless to force him to learn it.”,这句话中,him和it这两个代词都有明确的先行词,分别是a child和knowledge,因此句子的含义非常清楚。
可是,不少学生在使用这些代词时,虽然自己很清楚它们指代的是什么,但在作文中却没有交代清楚,结果这些代词非但没有使行文简洁,反而造成了意思上的模糊,让阅卷老师不知所云。
误:sometimes teachers will inform students of the heavy burden they have to bear.
正:sometimes the teacher will inform students of the heavy burden he has to bear.
2、修饰方面的错误
修饰语应紧靠被修饰的成分,并和它形成正确的逻辑关系。如果修饰语的位置不妥当,就会造出模棱两可的病句。
误:to keep the air clean, we must move the factories which give off poisonous gases to the countryside.
正:to keep the air clean, we must move the factories to the countryside if they give off poisonous gases.
3、一致方面的错误
在一个句子内部或紧邻的两三个句子之间,要保持时态、人称、数量的一致。
误:whether one enjoys or resents advertisements, we are actually bombarded with it every hour of the day.
正:whether we enjoy or resent advertisements, we are actually bombarded with them every hour of the day.
4、平行结构方面的错误
这里专指语态、比较级、非谓语形式、冠词用法、可数名词和不可数名词、不定代词单复数以及时态等错误。
(1)误:narrow streets easily cause to happen many traffic accidents.
正:narrow streets easily cause many traffic accidents. (to happen)
(2)误:a great change has been taken place since then.
正:a great change has taken place since then.
(3)误:but it may occur some new problems.
正:but some new problems may occur/arise.
(4)误:opportunities are only belonged to those who work hard.
正:opportunities only belong to those who work hard.
(5)误:the pace of our modern life is getting more faster and faster.
正:the pace of our modern life is getting faster and faster.
(6)误:electricity is the most important power in our daily life than other kinds of power.
正:electricity is the most important power in our daily life.
(7)误:thus our city will be greatly beautiful than it is now.
正:thus our city will be far more beautiful than it is now.
5、断句方面的错误
一句句子没有结束,又开始新的一句,结果造成句子结构不全,这就成为断句。
误:tv becomes an important part in our daily life. because we cannot live without it.
正:tv becomes an important part in our daily life,because we cannot live without it.
6、连词方面的错误
作文中缺少必要的连词,或错用连词的现象也比较普遍。
误:one should improve his english,one should overcome difficulties in studies.
正:if one wants to improve his english,he should overcome difficulties in studies.
7、搭配方面的错误
学生作文中用词搭配方面的错误也占有较大比例。曾经在一次作文阅卷中,近千篇作文在表达“上海交通越来越拥挤”这个意思时,几乎没有一篇用 heavier,大多数人用的是the traffic in shanghai is getting more and more crowded,而traffic是不能与crowded搭配的。
(1)误:however the speed of a car is much faster than that of a bicycle.
正:however the speed of a car is much higher than that of a bicycle.
(2)误:in the past the price of milk was so expensive that most families could not afford it.
正:in the past the price of milk was so high that most families couldn’t afford it.
由此可见,要提高对词语搭配的驾驭能力,除了要在平时的阅读过程中多积累,还需要克服中文中诸如“速度快”、“价格贵”、“学习知识”、“人减少”等搭配的影响,避免写出look book或see book这样的笑话来。
8、误用方面
学生作文中对词语的误用也相当普遍,误用词语不仅不能准确地表达作者的意思,而且也会闹出笑话。
(1)误:with the industrious development,there is a great need for different kinds of energy.
正:with the industrial development,there is a great need for different kinds of energy.
(2)误:most big cities are plagued by traffic jams which effect our daily life.
正:most big cities are plagued by traffic jams which affect our daily life.
心专注寄宿考研希望各位小伙伴们在备考的时候,多多注意这些小错误,不要犯哦~
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